If I Loved You, I Would Tell You This - Pg 110 : Gaining Ground

   My dad died on the night my bathwater ran with an electric current in it. Or maybe it was the other way around. My water ran electric on the night my father died. In some ways that sounds better, more poetic, I guess. For one thing, it scans. Ba-duh ba-duh ba-duh ba-duh ba-duh ba-duh ba-duh. But it isn't truly accurate as to what it felt like at the time. It felt more like the first way.